Disappearing
For a love that now I know it’s forever gone…
I will leave
And set you free
I will walk away
From your dreams
From your memories
Far away I’ll be
As “Goodbye” you said
You needn’t to worry
For I won’t call again
Erase me
Remove me
Send me away from
Your thoughts
Don’t think of me anymore
I’ll hide my feelings
In the dark corners
Of my heart
I won’t ever tell those
To you again
My voice you will forget
I’m leaving now
Setting you
Forever
Free
November 28, 2007 at 2:53 am
Way too sad… Touching, deep…
Hope you’re not so sad, ’cause sadness is not the best feeling to have. I know it from experience…
Big hugs!
November 28, 2007 at 3:00 am
wow… i am truely touched… i don’t know how I feel about the other comment above, but my view is that the only way to get over someone is to completly get them out of your life… if they are allowed in at any level u can never get over what was lost…
November 28, 2007 at 10:34 am
This shouldn’t happen in True Love. If it happens means the other person is in fake Love with you… so it’s better to set him/her free.. very well written..
“It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, and an day to love someone… but it takes a lifetime to forget someone”
November 29, 2007 at 9:40 am
Yes, very touching… I can even see the shape of a broken heart written with the words of this poem… the last strophe being the tear parting your heart in two…
December 3, 2007 at 10:02 pm
You are a lover a romantic a child of dreams.
There’s no right or wrong way.
Just your way cause there is no other way.
I am there for you as you are there for yourself.
Tell me you can dream yourself into a cloud.
And I will be there with a warm hot chocolate.
Kind Regards and great poetic amorous,
Michael
December 5, 2007 at 11:38 am
really touchin Heart !!!
December 9, 2007 at 6:37 pm
Who has not experienced this situation from one side or another? It is tragic . . . and so it is a wonderful theme for poetry. And you have communicated it powerfully.
August 2, 2008 at 10:29 pm
Thank you
June 9, 2009 at 4:58 pm
wow got to be one of the best cuz it truely touches you and it sooo sad that i feel like that too right now that i feel like dieing!!!…..<3
