You were lying in my lap
I was touching your head.
While watching you sleep
I was singing lullabies.
Oh how I miss those days
That we together spent
You seemed a baby to me
So helpless and sweet
I shall never forget
Those moments of
Full happiness
The baby should be missing you too.. 🙂
I like simplicity in this writing.. It has come out verty cute.. Keep up your writing. I love it.
Vry nice…….
It was a sweet free verse. I like it.
@ Bharath: thank you for your sweet comment. I’ll keep up my writing…cuz it helps me keep going. 🙂
@Initial-M: Thanks!!! I have problems finding your blog… can you help me out?
@Kevin: Thanks for comming again 🙂
very interesting, but I don’t agree with you
Idetrorce
Ohh… thanks for stopping by… but, with whom you don’t agree?? And as regards what matter you think differently? May I know?
Buenos dias Mary!
Idetrorce es un spam, el mismo comentario aparece en muchos blogs esos ultimos dias… Kevin lo tenia, yo lo tenia, Cafe Crem lo tenia…
Y que tal esta mi pajarito hoy? Acurrucado en su nido o volando por el universo?
Un abrazo muy fuerte, y que tengas un dia maravilloso, a pesar de tu pena tan profunda…
hey..dat reminds me ov Edward 4m Twilight Saga…